Spazkid's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TGWTG versus dr. Insano]

That was really unfunny.
and just made me cringe litterally the whole time. not only was it a lame and awkward but it was ugly and hard on the eyes.

Jesus christ learn how to draw basic anatomy like hands, feet, and the basic structure of a face,
you cant just insert the same flapping mouth for all your characters it looks like shit, you need to but forth that little bit of effort.

I've said it before and i'll say it again, Improve. You've been drawing like this for what like 10 years now? You NEED to plan out your animation not just animate as you go, thats what kids do who just start out, aren't you like almost 30.

I gave you 1 star, and even I feel that's way to generous.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Alright, noted.

[Apple Consumers]

whats up with your mouths they like never close all the way, the jagged movement and squished giraffe necks are a little weird too. Your voice actings pretty bad, you should emote more or get someone who can.

PS. lets be Icon buddys

Patar121 responds:

This is probably the second time ive ever lip synced, cause i didnt think it was that hard until now, and uh yeah i need to find a voice actor so thanks for the advice

[Moisture Care]

Great job bro

You're animations always outstanding with its bouncyness and smoothness but the issue I have with it, and its mainly how you shade just how you do it it either overly shaded or slightly, im not sure but it sometimes makes your characters seem oversaturaded with shade. And the light source is sometimes all over the place.

just some minor gripe, other than that impressive as always.

coughing-dog responds:

I did notice the light source thing watching through it later, when it was a bit late to fix. I usually dont shade characters coz its time consuming and obviously I forgot to think about where it should go. Anyway, cheers for the review man.

[The Adventures of WillieD]

holy cow

this is impressive, Ive never felt more apart of a flash before, the fact that I can actually copy and past the text from the animation just furthers my experience. Its like, im in control, im whillie rogers with my dog Wacky wonders, using my stock sound clips to ward evil.

second episode now.

RogersEntertainment responds:

Thank you very much

[Mario's Date]

impressive.

your animation is something else. Im also glad you didnt rely on any lame popculture or meme shit to get a point across or get extra brownie points. Just alot of smooth body language and it was fun to look at.

goodjob.

coughing-dog responds:

fuck memes, haha

[Groundcats!]

I dont have an Iphone!

but if I did I would buy this. let me just wire you a buck, and well call it a deal.

JohnnyUtah responds:

you just keep making hateful, hilarious toons spaz. that is payment enough.

[Dora VS Swiper]

Painful.

this is awful and itd be nice not to see ricepirate in literally everything and not give handouts to literally everyone who asks. Like for god sakes this is horrendous, and I'll break it down the best I can.

The writting: Fuck, what was that? id expect this stuff from 2003 but not 2012. Nothing in this was a joke, and nothing in this was funny, the unnecessary cursing made me cringe and the painfully obvious rape scene couldnt of come out more sooner.

Animation: its funny, people told me you have come along way and made such a improvement to your previous video which essentially WAS just you tracing over Anime Intros and splicing them all together in a traced mess. This only proves my point. Stiff tweens and very lazy animation. Like real lazy.

Voicework: awful, swiper was way to over the top and it didnt correspond with dora or boots which sounded piss poor in comparison. Doras voice especially, I understand her voice may be hard to do, you sounded like you were out of breath the whole time with no emotion.

Just stop, take some time to improve or something, you'll be gload you did.

bocodamondo responds:

well ok . thanks for the review. and i yeah i guess you right. that WAS not really my best thing.
but well i just had this idea and i animate it. and yep i suck at comedy too ^^. thats why most of my videos are NOT comedy :)^

anyway im sorry about what happend here. but i guess that was the last flash "like this".
next one will be like my other flashes. anime style not comedy blabla...

[TOME Episode 02]

well

Id like to thank you on behalf of removing rocoon and Dumpling as that saved me about 2 more paragraphs of writing but I still have some points to make with your flash

What happened to the red haired guy and the fire girl? I assumed the way episode 1 was going and how he was the first character I saw he was the main character?.. I imagine the point of this episode was to give gamcrazed some point but why do that in the SECOND EPISODE. Most "shows" have segmented character Episodes after you get a general Idea of who the characters are and how they act. If gameverse was a shadowy lone wolf who only shrugged and muttered sighs once and a while throughout this series id Understand him fitting that cliche style of what you were going for. And I'm almost convinced gamecrazed will announce himself as either being openly gay or a legit hacker. Considering He has the SAME powers as Sludge girl and knows the Hackers weaknesses. And aside from that, Where is the threat? Gamecrazed literally has the power to apparently remove a Renounced hacker out of the game either that, or copy the powers of the hackers considering how he just swapped her sludge with his purple sludge, so who stands a threat? If you make your characters untouchable badasses thats stupid. That leaves no point to further the series.
So basically the guy in the blue with red hair has the power to hurt weak hackers, and gamecraze has the power to remove strong hackers. and why are the hackers characters with abilities? Itd make sense to convey the hackers as dark coated entities that cause rips in the data and actually CAUSE issues in the game, and speaking of game, this doesn't feel like a game whatsoever this feels more like a fantasy world with weird looking characters. You should consider showing like Error messages, and Random popups and Binary codes, fucking anything, to make it seem like its a hacker attacking it. It just doesn't feel like this is an MMO having your self inserted character have his status information pop up every now and then will not convince me otherwise. I hope you consider all these because I really think it would help your series, there is so much plot holes in this its hard to call it a series. Stop using the same recurring nylock jokes its not remotely funny or cute and you've done it more than 10 times and thats not an exaggeration.

You should also consider actual lip syncing? I know you can do it, you've proven you can, this is lazyness on your part. Also gradients? Gradients?? just dont bother shading at all if thats the case, Gradients actually Ruin your stuff. I mean, Gradients are ok for certain effects and backgrounds, but when I have to see lazy gradients on the main characters it just looks bad. and more frame by frame and less tweens. you should consider using Vcams..seriously.

also the easter eggs were painfully unfunny, and im greatful you didnt include them as last second filler!

just consider it.

[Santa Travel]

haha

The crushing of the baby and the parents offing themselves over that, made this for me.

Hulalaoo responds:

) yeah !!!

[TOME Short: Hackers]

a short?

Sense when is a short this long? Or maybe it isnt long at all but your slow moving animation style makes everything seem like time is at still. And dont shorts have a purpose? This might as well had been an extension to your previous episode because I see no point to its existence. Honestly, watching this made me cringe, the sexual orientation joke was out of left field and the lack of any effort in lip syncing is depressing. I also hate these characters, Most bland unenjoyable and unfunny characters of your entire series.