I'm crying
from laughing so hard.
I'm crying
from laughing so hard.
obviously you can animate
Thats a blind givin. However this was nothing short of disappointing. 90% of this animation were google images and traced pictures in general. The other 10% was the minimal animation you put in. If it was anyone else this would of been blamed for sure. I'm just saying, YOU can do alot better than this. This "Swf" just seems like it should have been some short to go with this series, not an episode. I gave you a 3 for the effort you put forth in animating and what little production value you gave.
The voice acting.
Your animation was fun to look at and overall very well done. Frame by Frame is really annoying unless done right. However, The reason I had to give this a 6 was souly because of the voice acting. Id rather not listen to some 15 year old voice in ever single apple Situation. Had I heard verity id of given this a 10. That and your mic quality is bad. Alot of Spikes in the audio. its also a little to quiet. Just sayin.
I know I'm terrible at voice acting. However I'm worse at writing scripts. Not many voice actors would bother voicing my shit series.
Fake and Gay Camel in a Tiny Car lolololsaosala
Review: Its great! to see someone finally place them attention consuming faggots in their place. I personally despise Nearly every youtube partner (Especially ray William Johnson Because hes a disgusting newfag.) This is brilliant, And this will forever remain in my favorites. And heart <=)
10 as it was ment to be.
thanks cory you so dayum sexy
An Epic battle Between good and Evil!
for something you say took 4 years I could honestly think of 100 more things better you could do with your time. Whats the point of a writer? This story is that of Sonic Adventure. So its anything BUT original. As art wise. This basically was traced sonic X screenshots on a boring blue background.
Cool flash man
I absolutely adore your voice acting. How you can argue between yourself is entertaining. I also love how simplistic you make the character look. Not this overly detailed bullshit it gives it more a cartoon feel.
Shapes?
Oh god where the hell do I begin. I dont like the concept of roomate shapes nor do I like the character design..if you can say they have any. The voice acting was gutter quality not to mention no one knew how to act or emot. Alot of background sound. Some soundeffects were way to loud and hurt my ears at times.
Now that ive talked about voices and concepts im gonna talk about the lip syncing. Ouch. this part looked rushed and messy. Usually with mouths certain sounds will go with the mouths. Like a "ess" sound would usually be a toung located behind the roof of the mouth. Shit like that. Mainly it was just all frame by frame mouths so the sizes would randomly change. One thing I did like about your flash (Quite possibly the only thing) was the backgrounds. You do a good job with that for the most part.
In conclusion ditch this idea. Shapes are gay and not that creative.
GOOD JOB THOUUGH
A little Overrated.
This wasn't to appealing sadly. I mean, The Visuals and Animations were Fine. nothing to over the top just something id expect a typical sprite animator to convey.
But, What really is bad is not having voice acting. Now, I'm not the kind of person to sit here and manually click the space bar while i'm treated to your fascinating Sonic FanFic. I'm just really not. Speaking of Idea. Don't you think this has been done uhh..a considerably large amounts of time. A simple search would discover like 50,000 sonic sprite animations about Sonic and Zombies. (The other half is SonicVsmario like godamn.
Alright I'll close this up. Maybe try doing your own sprites. Its more satisfying to make something then already have it made and ready. Keep on trucking.
Thanks, a little bit harsh though. I mean, I just looked up on newgrounds and I just found two or three other "sonic" sprite movies with zombies. Also mine is a trilogy ! However, voice acting would have made the video a hundred times better, but I just couldn't do that. (Does this mean you even couldn't enjoy smbz?) By the way, some sprites are custom made by me.
Well thanks anyway ^___^
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